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Review:Jane_Volturi says:
PREA! It's been too long now since I've last read anything that you've written. I almost forgot how amazing your stories are! I've been waiting for you to do a Wood fanfic ever since you told me that you liked Sean Biggerstaff lol, so it was awesome to visit your authors page today and realise that there was one up - and what's more, it's centred around QUIDDITCH (which, if you haven't already guessed, I absolutely love).

I forgot how great your OC's are. Keegan is brilliant; really funny and full of life! I can definitely relate to her. Lol, if that was a party about football, and there were hot players invited, then I would so totally have been there too and probably late like Keegan faffing about with my appearance lol. Ha ha, don't tell me that certain Spanish fitties didn't come into your mind whilst you were writing that bit, I know you too well.

QUOTE: 'Seriously... Sometimes a girl just has to take a step back and go "Sweet Merlin, I look good!" or else we'd go crazy with stupid teenage insecurities. ' - Honestly, well said, and funny too (well it definitely got a laugh out of me, that's for sure)!

Aw, and can I just say, your Chapter Image is B-yoo-ti-full! I've not seen your TDA gallery in ages, but by the looks of things you're probably well on your way to becoming a Staff Artist (if you're not then that's criminal because you so totally deserve it)!

I think that the word I'm looking for is 'anyway'. Lol, back to the review.

I also love all of the agressive language in this. I know it's not everybody's cup of tea (urgh, did I seriously just use a golden oldie phrase?) but personally I think all of the 'bloodys' and 'gits' are hilarious and really make both Keegan's character and the general dialogue come alive with the humor of the story.

I aso really love how Oliver and Keegan interact. The whole love/hate/proud/stubborn/competetive scenario that's sure to unwind definitely has a lot of potential for humor and excitement in the future of this story. I can't wait to see how this all unravels.

I really loved this! Off to read and review more!

- Katie -

PS: OMFG! Oliver was brilliant in this, I was literally drooling every time he spoke lol.

Author's Response: Omg Katie!! You're amazing for giving me such a lovely review!! you always have given me the best reviews ever and I'm so glad you're reading this!!

First of all, yes yes I was thinking of a football gala hehe. I always think of how AMAZING it'd be to go to a football event with all those sexy footballers... I would SOO take forever getting ready. Like professional hair and everything! But I don't think I'd be as composed as Keegan... I'd be more like OMG OMGOGMOGMOG VILLA? TORRES??? CASILLAS??? *cries and faints* LOL... I know you'd be freaking out with me ;)

ANYWAY back to the review. Awe yeah the language is a bit harsh, isn't it?? It's just... in real life, I curse like a sailor but I didn't want to use curse words in every sentence and thought this would be a nice alternative. Although they're pretty harsh as well, they seem to sound a bit nicer than the f word, you know? :) Glad it is YOUR cup of tea though ;) heh heh.

I'm so glad you love Oliver. It's a bit over the top I admit the interaction, but I like it. I mean I had reviews saying it's a bit cliche, but you know what? Boo on them cause I like my story hehe. But I'm glad you enjoyed it!! And gahhh, thank you for the lovely TDA compliment.. I'm not ready for Staff yet but maybe someday soon :)

Thanks again for the AMAZING review!!

xxx


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