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Review:momotwins says:
So I clicked on this one because I thought Les Mis as soon as I saw the title. ;) Excellent song choice. And I love a good Harry/Ginny ship, especially during DH.

Your flow and pacing are good, you don't move too fast or too slow. I like the romance, you portray it well. Your characterization is good, if a little on the angsty side, but sometimes that's fun.

Grammatical/spelling errors:
Ginny reached the stairs and began her accent -- It's "ascent", not accent
Harry kissed her forehead and replied, “the pain you feel now -- "the" should be capitalized at the beginning of that dialogue.
Ginny said, nonchalantly -- unnecessary comma
bringing Ginny out of her reprieve -- I think you actually want the word "reverie" there, not "reprieve"
was too much for her to bare -- should be "bear", not "bare"
“I know,” she sobbed, “But this is how I get by -- "but" in that dialogue should not be capitalized.

Nice job! Enjoyable though sad. I think you really captured Ginny's emotions well, and the song is a perfect complement to the story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and for pointing out all those little mistakes. I've now gone through and corrected them all.

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