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Review:ravenclaw_princess says:
This was a really good follow on chapter. Once again, you captured the strained relationship between Lily and Snape really well. I fell sorry for Sanpe because he knows he screwed up really bad, and in some ways he keeps screwing up. I really like how he is trying to revive their friendship. Lily meant to much to Snape to not fight for her.

Lily to is fighting, but she is fighting not to give him a second chance. I kind of feel that Snape only ever shows his true self around her and to every one else he puts on this tough guy act. At least that is how I feel it is coming across and I like it.

James was cool. I liked this line “Not at all, Snape.” This time he said his name with much more force. “I just--oh, I don’t know--actually keep my word? I wouldn’t expect a greaseball like you to understand something as noble as that.” It really seemed to sum up James' attitude towards Lily and he wasn't doing it to impress her, but more to keep a promise.

the chapter flowed really nicely and their was a beautiful level of detail. Grammatically it was also extremely strong. Well done. This is a beautiful story.

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you so much! This was such a lovely, detailed review!

I agree in thinking that Snape wouldn't just give up on her. She was really the only person he was ever close to. It's hard to just let go of something like that even if she is pulling away. Lily I see as someone that, once hurt, doesn't give someone the chance to hurt her again. It's very difficult for both of them.

I really love the way James turned out in this fic. I feel his maturity was a gradual thing that didn't just happen over the summer. He really does care about Lily, he just has a hard time getting his priorities straight sometimes. She's means a lot to him and he's beginning to realize he really would do anything for her--even give up his favourite punching bag.

Thank you again and again for such a lovely review! It really made me smile. :)

-Dem-


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