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Review:Violet Gryfindor says:
This is fantastic, Lee Anne! I'm so sorry that I didn't read it earlier because although it was worth waiting for, it deserves a lot more love from readers. The emotions in this are really well-written, and it was necessary to explore them both in Freddy and Crane after the previous chapter. I think it's more necessary for Freddy, actually, as she starts in denial, then with the slowly growing understanding of what her own feelings add up to. I loved the build-up in this chapter with that final, crashing realization that neither she nor Crane believed her lie. Well, she may a little bit, or may go about making herself believe it, but she's Freddy; she does all sorts of silly things. It's what makes her lovable. ;)

Another great thing about this chapter were all the double entendres and misunderstandings. It was like watching two people speaking entirely different languages, misusing their phrase dictionaries as they went. They're wonderful characters to watch together because of this, and you capture their awkwardness really well - it adds both drama and amusement to the story.

I kept thinking "Oh Freddy!" to myself every time she did something stupid, like going upstairs in Crane's house. *sighs and shakes head* Very Bluebeard's wife of her, though unlike that story, she discovered the human side of Crane. You created a fantastic atmosphere in that scene as Freddy creeps up the stairs and into this "secret room", which was like the heart of Crane with its photographs and the ticking of the grandfather clock (sorry, can't help but analyse a little :P).

Thanks for another great chapter of this story! I have no idea where you're going to take it next - it's so unique that I can't anticipate what direct you'll take the plot, which is, of course, what in part makes it such a great read. ^_^

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