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Review:Jasnie says:
Hi, I really like your story so far I read all 6 chapters that are available right now,(I read them all in the same day). I'm going to comment most of the story in this review and I will add on typing corrections or suggestions in the review of the chapter concerned. I once wanted to be an editor and then a translator. Please tell me if you would like the typing corrections and/or suggestions to be private (email) and I would like to propose my self as a translator (from english to french). I really love this story it's got a good plot and I'm impatient to see where you will go from there. I love that you only used letters in the first chapter, I thought oh no the letters are already done :(... but it well resumed Hermione's summer and the situation of most of the caracters we love from the original books. It is also fun to know that Dumbledore is still there in the last line of the chapter, very cleaver! I wonder if Snape is still there or if he's got his place somewhere in your story since you took back some of the dead caracters. I will continue ''reviewing'' if that's a word, in the other chapters.
Good job continue your great work!

Author's Response: Hi Jasnie!

As I said in a previous response, I do sincerely hope you're still active and around and most importantly, willing to help me out! :) I read through my writing and realized there were many typos and other small editing mishaps that an outside editor would have been able to pick out and fix. I would really appreciate your help, if you're still interested! :D

On another note, thanks for your encouragement! It's reviews like this that sincerely make me want to pick this back up and continue it.

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