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Review:Blue Flame says:
Oh! A very intriguing opening chapter!

You're description of everything is lovely, and makes it quite easy for a reader to get a clear picture of the scene you're setting. ^^ I have to admit I didn't realize it was Sirius until he gave her his name!

I like how they've met, and I am definitely interested in who hurt her and why. You seem to be heading in a good, right direction! You've set up a good plot, with an interesting OC and loads to do with why she was hurt, by who, etc. It's an excellent start.

Lovely chapter!
-Caiti

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! :D

I always fear that I'm either too descriptive or too vague, so I'm glad to hear that it gives the reader a clear image!

Thanks again! I really love to hear feedback like this!


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