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Review:BellaFan202 says:
Here I am with your requested review! :)

The first thing that grabbed my attention as I read this was that Addie was telling her dad that he wasn't allowed to talk to her, and that made me laugh. Especially this line: "Can't you see, Dad? I am no longer a naive little fourth year. I am a fifth year, with high levels of maturiosity and a prefect badge to prove it."

^That was awesome^ :)
vBut not quite as awesome as thisv :)

"You have been a wonderful father, a great role model, and I have enjoyed every minute I've spent with you. Goodbye, Dad."

And the *le sigh* was epic. It made me laugh like crazy. :)
So, I'm starting to think that the rest of this review is going to be favorite quotes, even though you were probably hoping for some constructive critism. Here's to hoping I don't disappoint you. ;)

I loved the "you shut up, no you, you" between Scorp and Addie. That made me laugh as welll. :)

Anywho, the whole thing was brilliant and I absolutely adored it. :)

10/10
~BellaFan202~
(LiveLaughLoveHarryPotter on the forums)

P.S. Sorry it took so long. My favorite song came on half way through reading this and I had to stop and sing and dance along with it. :P

Author's Response: What are you talking about taking so long? :P Your fastness amazes me! ;)

Anyway, thank you for the review. I was hoping for a bit more crit, but this has made me a lot happier than crit would have :P It was a lovely review, one of the best reviews I've had :)

Eleanor

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