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Review:Blue Flame says:
A-hem. *flounces in and takes up tent space*

So m'dear, this is a lovely, adorable little piece! I like how you had Remus react, focusing on the negatives of it first rather than the positive of becoming a father. Very IC for him. Using Tonks' hair to reflect her mood was also a lovely touch! =P It kinda added to it, in a way.

I particularly liked this: 'That was what he really wanted, not to be spending every night thinking like the monster he had fought so hard against becoming.' as it's such a good thing to add in. It's kind of sad that he has to let the monster free to be an asset to the war, but so necessary at the same time.

The interaction between them and overall story was lovely. ^^

-Caiti

Author's Response: *rolls eyes at the tent space comment* Indeed. Although didn't you see the sign already out for you? :P Anyway, I'm glad that you thought that it was lovely and adorable. I was rather worried about if they would be IC or not so I'm glad that you think they are.

Thank you! ^^


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