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Review:Monique says:
I looove how Penny isn't gorgeous. I love how you described her as bushy eyebrows with glasses. I can see the potential for her to become at least above average, but it's not like some sort of tween movie where all you do is take off her glasses and let her hair down, and omg, she's gorgeous.

I really like her personality too. She's this Ravenclaw who isn't meek, but very prideful of her intelligence. I can just see her in a classroom as that girl whom everyone expects to run for some sort of elected office at one point.

I wish Tammy made more of an appearance or that she would have more character development. She seems to be such a good complement to Penny's character, as that meek, smart, but very naive character. I can see where their friendship stems from.

I also love the conversation between Penny and Sirius-slash-James. It flowed very smoothly and shows Penny's arrogance and her reliance on her own intelligence and I think any smart, grounded Ravenclaw female would initially assume that Sirius and James weren't very smart, so I love when she dished out her extensive vocabulary on them, not expecting Sirius to understand.

Overall I really like this story and can't wait for more chapters. The characters unravel the stories really well. It's not the plot that is completely driving the story--and I like that. It's the characters own unique personalities and their reactions that help the story move along.

Also, will be hearing more from the boys from the previous chapters? I forgot their names, the ones they met on the train and ditched them?

Author's Response: Haha Penny's very far from that! :P & Tammy will be making much more of an appearance as the story progresses! I'm just trying to establish relationships between herself and the Marauders first before it delves into everything :)

This review was very nice and I really appreciate it!!! Thank you for taking the time to write it :)


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