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Review:raznilla says:
acciochocolate319 here, with your review :)

First, I'm going to say that this story is beautifully written! You write with awesome grammar and no spelling mistakes. Your story flows really well. I also like the few oxymorons you have in there: "calm rage", "determined lethargy." They make it really interesting :)

I'm having a difficult time coming up with something to work on! If there was a flaw, it would be this: "The young elf, who was still a fairly recent addition to the Black household, having taken over the duties after his own mother died." I read it, and for some reason, thought you were talking about Sirius' mum! It isn't a major issue, though, so no worries!

All in all, fantastic story! :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much for leaving such a great review! I love that you found the oxymorons, too, it's not something a lot of people notice. :3


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