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The story's content it pretty good. I find it believable and enjoyable to read. However, the writing itself, craft-wise, has finally got me enough, that I cracked by the eleventh chapter and had to write a review. The grammar is all over the place, with verb tenses not agreeing with each other. Also, there are a few factual errors in the story. First of all, Errol shouldn't have been the owl to go into the dormitory to wake up ron, because by then, he had his own owl, Pig. Secondly, Ron shouldn't have been able to go into Hermione's dormitory because, as previously observed in the books, boys can't go up the girl's staircase to their dorms, because the stairwell turns into a slide, preventing the boys from the climbing the staircase. Besides the grammatical errors, and these two [ so far] errors that i've seen.The story is pretty entertaining, so I'll give you that. =]

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