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Review:chocoholic907 says:
Of COURSE I spotted the reference!!
"are u a wizard or not!!" xD!
Nice chapter, loved it!!
The drama is brilliant :D
two chapters in less than a week?!?
U are on a ROLL!!
I'm getting really excited, I expect great things from u, Betty :)
just one small teensy problem, I thought voldemort was slightly oocish...
It seems like he would have been able to find out what was happening with Draco...
A brilliant man like that doesn't seem the type who would create a creature more powerful than him... also, voldie seems too expressive... I imagine him more as a strong silent type...But never mind me ;)
also, why don't you get a beta reader? They're really helpful :)
I don't know how to get one on this site, but on another website I use its pretty simple... I can't type ou the website cause that would be a link, but if u want it, I can mail to u over at the forums :)Just a suggestion :) I'm searching for one right now in fact :)
but other than that, the chapter was amazing!! The plots coming out really well, and I can't wait to see how hermione reacts when she talks to Draco again!
Lovely chapter, waiting for the next impatiently :D

Author's Response: yep! you're right! seriously, that's my favorite line in the entire first book :)

but thanks so much! and even though you weren't the first reviewer... (shame!) i'll still give you a cyber cookie. :3

oh and i got two chapters in in a week? really? it must be the apocalypse! yeah... i'll try to get them in quicker but probably no more of that... :( i'm not that magical!

hmmm... i see what you mean about voldie... i guess sometimes i just get carried away and forget the basis of the characters. example a, chapter 4:
"hey draco!" "hey hermione!" "even though we've hated each other for 6 years and are on different sides let's be friends!" "Ok! even though i despise you and you are a mudblood and i just regained my memories i'll be your friend!"

... yeah... i get a little ooc with my characters sometimes... '-_-

and about the beta... great idea! i'll try to get one sooner or later! :)

thanks again!

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