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Review:firefawn says:
First things first, your attention to detail and emotion is excellent. The scene and emotions practically drip off the page, and one can picture exactly what type of room, location, etc. that the conversations are taking place in. On the flip side, you do not provide too much detail, so it is not overbearing by any means, and still allows the reader to have some imagination in regards to setting. Essentially you struck the perfect balance here so great job!

Secondly, the interaction between the mother and daughter is excellent and realistic in a very refreshing type of way. Not every family gets along perfectly, and quite often there is a peace keeper in a family, and as soon as the peace keeper is removed words can become more heated and harsh, which you have shown perfectly. As far as the grieving processes go, you have shown the PERFECTLY. I work in a hospital's hospice/terminally ill unit, so have seen a LOT of families grieve in different ways, and you have exemplified two grieving types and just how horribly they can clash together with excellent precision and style. Fantastic work on that!!! 10/10

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