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Review:MajiKat says:
my. god
procrastinating with horror? girl, WRITE MORE OF IT!!

in 700 words you made my blood run cold. the imagery was incredible. knowing the folklore makes it even more incredible, and you did such a fabulous job with this.

perfect casting. teddy was absolutely terrifying, but pitying as well. and the sisters. yikes. i loved it. i love it when people twist innocence and play with metaphor the way you have done here.

those last two sentences are so powerful, absolutely amazing, and the complexity in these 700 words is just wow. this has that beautiful folkloric thing about it, an ambiguity that i adore in written works.

just amazing. i don;t know what else to say hun. you need to write in this genre and style more often. i love your humour and your banter but this...Gina, this shows what an incredible writer you are and shows your control over language.

i loved it. in my favs. this will haunt me.

Kate xx

Author's Response: KATEEE. I can only write this stuff when I'm procrastinating, truefax.

I love that you saw that touch of pity in Teddy. I meant for it to be possible to interpret him in multiple ways -- that he might have been seduced by Dominique or that he imagined that Dominique wanted him and he was the one who pressed upon her. In my set of notes for this fic, Teddy justifies his actions to himself by reminding himself that Dom had been promiscuous, a very twisted thought that unfortunately, appears too much in reality.

All of you who write lyrical/terrifying/brilliant fic are always inspiring me to try something different ♥ You included!

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