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Review:Snapdragons says:
I wouldn't have guessed it was your first shot at horror from the writing. Seriously though, this was really amazing. It was chilling and terrifying and so, so well done. Gah. Why can't I write like this at 3 am? (scratch that, why can't I write like this when I'm fully awake? The universe must hate me.)

I enjoyed the vagueness and the different way that it was written. I'd try to analyze it, but I'm generally pretty bad at that, and school just finished so my brain's gone for the summer. Sorry! :P

But I enjoyed the comparisons between light and dark, and the idea that you can't escape your past. (wow I'm super deep)

The imagery was breathtaking (that sounds strange when addressing horror stories, but it was!) and your characters were wonderful. I loved having the connection to Little Red.

Your horror is just as wonderful as your humor/adventure/romance etc, and I think you should write more. :D Then I could gush over that, too. You managed to do a wonderful job in less than 1000 words, so congratulations! ;)

Great job overall. :D

Author's Response: Bahaha, l I had to sacrifice any semblance of a normal sleep schedule to write at 3am at all! Be glad you have that!

And I am right there with you in that boat of people who are unsure of what it all means; it's all alright xD I'm a fairly plot-oriented person, and if you can imagine the things happening, you probably got all of what I intended. It's all about the dark sides of characters for me.

These oneshots come and go for me -- whenever I procrastinate, another one might just pop up!

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