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Review:Noblevyne says:
Onto the action! You are so good at balancing all the elements of a story: action, dialogue and character development; and you manage to give light even to the angstiest of stories (not a word, is angstiest, my computer informs me - it is now).

I'm very much liking how you're writing the interplay between the Marauders and NOT giving poor Pete the dumb stick to play with. James is great - strong, but in a very different way to Sirius, and he plays well off of him. Your writing for Remus is like a comfortable bed to slide back into - even though this is only the second chapter, you've managed to say a lot about them with few scenes.

Loving Sirius and Lily - I can't explain why, but you make them believable, which is what I appreciate most in a story, especially when it veers away from canon and my own favourite 'ships. It isn't forced, it isn't fluffy, it isn't easy and it's truthful.

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