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Review:LovelyMioneWeasley says:
Hello Kate!!

I hope all is going well for you in your life and I'm so glad to see that you are back with us updating some of your superfabulousawesome stories! :) I can't help but throw in a bit of suck up to see if you'll do more updating soon :D

As for In Ruin, I was very excited to see more chapters being added and especially since it was a Rose/Scorpius action chapter. How awesome that they finally stop tiptoeing around each other and just get right to the explosive obvious emotion and/or hormones that are affecting BOTH of them.

I'm glad you didn't leave us hanging about Frank; as a writer, we set up a pace and maybe certain goal points we want to hit in the chapter of a story and we sometimes leaving subplots or sides hanging off and it confuses the reader when we forget to mention them or acknowledge them at all especially when we had such huge drama with him last chapter.

Now, I actually have found one small issue I have with the story but I've justified how you portrayed the character in my mind as well so I'm all admist conflict. Internal conflict of course. I sympathise for Lily because we have only been viewed at her through the eyes of Scorpius who has been manipulated by her and Rose who obviously has issues with her. I find it unfair for a character to villanized--in all aspects. I think everyone has likeable qualities and I actually believe that you probably think that the same about Lily, but because the way you set up the narrator for the story, we are only privy to the thoughts of two people who don't necessairly like her. I admire you for sticking with the way you write, but I wish I could feel more sympathy for her or find a character that does because I don't think she is all bad.

I think I've rambled far more than approriate so I'll bid you adieu until next time. I love you and hope all is going good for you, my love.

xx Lindsey

Author's Response: hello darling!!!

yes all is well - been very busy but im on holidays now so hopefully, more writing time!! which means once the queue opens there will be updates!

hahahahaa yes. they are an interesting match. it shall be fun, lol.

frank will be back. i love him too much to leave him out, so he will reappear at some point in the story.

oh yes, lily will get her moment in the sun. rose hates her, and when you find out the reason, you will most likely be able to see it from both sides. i don't like to victimise either but yes, as rose and scor are the narrators lily has not had the chance to have a voice yet, but she will. i won't leave her without that. she is not all bad no, and she will show that.

thank you love!! i really appreciate all your fabulous reviews!

Kate xx

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