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Review:Mottsnave says:
This is a wonderfully atmospheric opening. You really have a gift for description; I love that you set a scene with several senses: sight hearing, touch. rather than just by appearances alone. You really let suspense build up by lingering on the details of the scene.

I also love how you build up a picture of these characters slowly, without really giving us any exposition, but still showing a lot of their history and relationship through their actions. This is a perfect example of showing, not telling, and it's very well done.

I do think it's a little unfair that you only have one chapter up so far! You can't leave us hanging in suspense like this!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I really appreciate my comments.

I know there's more description here than dialogue, so I really admire you for sticking through it. It's only a prologue, after all, but I'm relieved that you didn't have any trouble getting through it!

Thanks again for your review! It definitely made my morning.

- Rin

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