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Review:AC_rules says:
This was so sad! I was hoping for a happy reunion the whole way through and then... and then I got to the end. Wow.

I loved that you started in the middle of Lily's speech - that was a really good way of opening it and in general having her speak all the words rather than just say them made them all much more powerful.

Really moving all round, actually :)

Author's Response: Sorry, no happy ending :(

I wanted Lily to be speaking, to really be pouring her heart and soul out, I'm glad it came across. Someone commented to me that it can be difficult to start strongly on dialogue, it is cool that you you also picked up on this.

Thanks for the awesome review

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