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Review:ravenclaw_princess says:
Your writing is like poetry, it's breath taking. Everything just flowed together so well and there was some very deep thought and amazing imagery brought into the story from the very first chapter.

I like Lily's thoughts and how much she reflects on the past and her present and how she comes to realise what her true feelings are. You can see her hesitation towards James and the beginning, and also her fear that he will hurt her, but then slowly it all melts away.

The dialogue between the two of them was really nice and also powerful. You said alot with little actual spoken dialogue but it conveyed their emotions well.

Well done on a a very well written and moving piece.

Author's Response: Ooh, thank you so much! My true love is writing--and readingreadingreading--poetry, so that's wonderful encouragement ;).
Also, it's music to my ears to be told that Lily's "transformation", so to speak, was delivered how I hoped it would.
Oh, and "saying alot with little" says quite alot haha to a writer. It's the little things, the seemingly insignificant moments that truly make someone who they are, and that goes for a story, as well.
Thank you so much for your words--they mean the world to this writer's-block writer here *points to self*. Thanks, also, for reviewing!

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