Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:ThatRomantic says:
Hi!

This is RaindropDancer. I know this has taken forever for me to do but life's been in the way lately.

Anyway, I love this story! It's not too abstract to feel like I should know more, but it doesn't drag out description or setting the scene.

The narrative is good and the storyline simple while making it fairly unique. I love how excited Lily was by a ham and cheese toastie and how satisfied James was with what he did for her.

I enjoyed your James, and your Lily was adorable.

I thoroughly enjoyed it, thank you (:

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I definitely understand how life can get in the way of things, don't worry about it.
I'm so glad that you liked it, one day the plot just hit me. It took a little while to iron out details, but I'd like to think he knows slightly more about Lily than she thinks he does. Why else would he really be so head over heels in love with her? I wanted to go into more with other characters, but I felt it would get in the way of the point.
Thanks for reviewing! :D

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Submit Report:  





All stories remain the property of their authors and must not be copied in any form without their consent. This is an unofficial, not for profit site, and is in no way connected with J.K. Rowling, Scholastic Books or Bloomsbury Publishing or Warner Bros. It is not endorsed by any of the aforementioned parties. Rights to characters and their images is neither claimed nor implied. The use of photographs and/or the likeness of any person contained herein does not imply endorsement of any kind. Any depictions were obtained through publically available sources and therefore fall under fair use. Although we may provide links to other websites, we are not responsible for any material at these sites. You acknowledge that you link to these other websites at your own risk. All original administrative content is copyright of the site owner and must not be copied in any form (electronic or otherwise) without the prior consent of the siteowner. ©2000-2012 Fanfictionworld.net

[terms of service] [report abuse] [privacy policy] [site credits]
 
 

navigation

home

search HPFF
read stories
write stories
login/register
get help
site links
forums
podcasts
Terms of Service
Site Rules
contact us

  
 
 

categories & genres

Genre:
- crossover
- drama
- fluff
- general
- horror/dark
- humor
- mystery
- romance
- action/adventure
- angst
- au
- young adult

Popular Pairings:
- harry/ginny
- ron/hermione
- james/lily
- draco/hermione
- more...

Format:
- one-shot
- short story
- novella
- novel
- short story collection
- songfic

  
 
 

quick links

my account
ToS
random story
site rules
help
merchandise


  
 
 

fanfictionworld.net