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Review:ThatRomantic says:
Hi!

This is RaindropDancer. I know this has taken forever for me to do but life's been in the way lately.

Anyway, I love this story! It's not too abstract to feel like I should know more, but it doesn't drag out description or setting the scene.

The narrative is good and the storyline simple while making it fairly unique. I love how excited Lily was by a ham and cheese toastie and how satisfied James was with what he did for her.

I enjoyed your James, and your Lily was adorable.

I thoroughly enjoyed it, thank you (:

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I definitely understand how life can get in the way of things, don't worry about it.
I'm so glad that you liked it, one day the plot just hit me. It took a little while to iron out details, but I'd like to think he knows slightly more about Lily than she thinks he does. Why else would he really be so head over heels in love with her? I wanted to go into more with other characters, but I felt it would get in the way of the point.
Thanks for reviewing! :D


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