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Review:LilyGreenEyes says:
Brilliant twists in this chapter! Definitely getting much better the more I read, not that it wasn't already great to start with!

It was lovely to see Scorpius make an appearance, and to hear all about the relationship Sandy has with him. You really tackled that well :) And the part of big protective brother was written perfecty, I should know, my brother is rather like him actually!

You built some intrigue and tension into the chapter which was lovely to see and it broke the 'happy' mood well, prepared the ready for a bit more tension, I like it :) and hippogriff dung. I could have rolled with laughter if I didn't have a laptop on my knees! I may come begging for that in the future, it was brilliantly funny :)

You have a real knack for displaying other people's thoughts and opinions through Sandy's POV, and this must be so difficult to do when your writing but it really does make a difference when reading. It makes it easy to comprehend and integrate yourself with the wider world outside Hogwarts and the little Sandy/Lysander circle.

A fantastic twist in this chapter with what Scorpius tells her, you get the relationship bang on in my opinion and characterisation as well. Lysander's fear of Scorpius is quite funny, and Sandy's threat at the end of the chapter is quite funny yet menacing :)

Looking forward to reading more!

LGE

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