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Review:thehyacinthgirl says:
This was beautiful! I absolutely adored the story.

I liked the way you ended it, too. Not with Helena's death, but with her flight. I really enjoyed that because there are so many stories that simply focus on her death, as I mentioned before, so it's refreshing to see one that focuses on her life.

I wanted to hug Helena in this chapter, I really did. I felt bad that she and Godric couldn't be together because I feel that she did truly care about him.

It's a pity he couldn't have forgiven her.

Your characterizations, as always, were brilliant. I loved Helena and Godric, and even the horrid Baron (which I assume is the soon to become Bloody Baron?). I loved to hate the Baron, he seemed so enchantingly nasty that I think that he would give Rita Skeeter a run for her money. -shudder-

Your descriptions and word choices continued to make this piece flow quite nicely. Not to mention I didn't pick up on any grammatical or spelling errors - so kudos there.

I have always appreciated stories with that polished look.

I think that my favorite part was when Helena told Godric her heart never lied and he pauses yet carries on. It was so sweet whilst at the same time so heart wrenching that I wanted to punch the Baron in the face (even though he's a fictional character) for infringing upon her happiness and intruding on her meeting with Godric.

Not to mention I felt a twinge of annoyance at Rowena for being such a nosy, obnoxious cow. Everyone seems to assume that Helena was a brat - but I think you proved in this story that sometimes it's like mother like daughter. I really hated Rowena in this entire piece.

This story was highly original and very clever and I really adored every moment I spent reading it. Wonderful job! I really, really adore this.

Wonderful job!

♥
Linders

Author's Response: thank you Linders :)

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