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Review:Pretense Of Perfection says:
Excellent one shot! Normally I'd leave a very detailed review, but as I'm lazy and this is wonderful, I'm not going to. Good job!

Oh, and I feel so sorry for poor little Billy, he has no big stuffie to call his own. And no wonder why Charlie never marries and loves Dragons, its all Fabian's fault!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this kind review, it really made my day!!
I'm glad you enoyed the detailing and the characters as well. Yeah, poor Billy, already dealing with the hardship that comes with being the eldest!!
I love this one-shot so much, I'm actually working on making it a two-shot; with the second part being how Fabian goes back to confront his parents about his decisions.

I'm glad you enjoyed it and I really appreciate this review, no matter how much you found yourself lazy, you put the right words in there to make me happy!

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