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Review:ravenclaw_princess says:
Wow, this is such an emotional chapter. I loved it. You have written Lily really well and captured all of her emotions. You can see how cut up she is, how much she wants to forgive Snape, but just can't let herself, knowing that he will ultimately hurt her again. I love the ending too, it broke her heart to say what she did and that came across well.

Snape was equally well characterised and you could see his apology was sincere, he didn't mean thw words he had said and he wanted his best friend. It was a painfully sad to read and I could feel all of the emotions.

The chapter itself was very well writen and I love the detail and the descritpion that you brought to the story. It was such a lovely read.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

It was an incredibly emotional chapter to write, as well. The story between Lily and Snape always, always makes me sad. Mostly it's the regret he feels that he can never get rid of. It's heartbreaking.

I'm so glad that Lily's torn emotions came across well. She was obviously angry with him, yet he's been her best friend for so long--it's hard to just let that be the end of it.

The same for Snape. I imagine he regretted it the moment he said it, but he couldn't very well take it back. Such a hard thing to have to live with.

Thank you very kindly for this lovely review. It truly made my evening. :)

-Dem-


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