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Review:megan2u says:
Wow. Just wow. I really liked how well you got into Lily's head (and brought the reader in with you!). Too many awesome descriptions you used for me to go through all of them, but I really liked the line on changing our pasts and the flying without a broom. *swoon*
Their bantering definitely lived up to expectations. I also really liked the tidbit of James being scared of public speaking and Lily commenting on his lovely voice.
I think you did a good job showing Lily transitioning from "hating" James to seeing how good they could be together.
One little nitpicky comment: you used "of" instead of "off" in the line "Now kindly fall of a cliff"
If this wasn't for the Romantic Situation Challenge, it might be a bit sappy for me, but since being sappy was pretty much the brief I love it!
Thanks again for participating in my challenge! The winners will be announced shortly!

Author's Response: Hi, megan2u--thanks for reviewing!
As you may've experienced, getting a "wow" in response to your writing is the epitome of fabulousness for a writer ;). Thanks for being specific about what you liked (and didn't haha)--I was afraid that it had been too sappy, and I'm glad it was suited for the challenge...otherwise, I would now go back and rewrite the entire thing. Although I'm glad you brought attention to that, because from now on, I can make sure to "keep the sap on tap", if you will :P. It's always wonderful to hear a "great story! loved it!", but it's muchmuch better to have the specifics, so one knows what she did right and wrong.
Thanks, again, for the challenge!


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