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Review:charlottetrips says:
Hello! Thanks for getting my thread moving again! So here we go. Iím only going to this first right now because honestly I donít really do Dramiones set in Hogwarts years. Too OOC for me. I know, I know. Dramione in general is OOC. But letís not nitpick shall we?

Hm, thatís a bitÖbrave of Neville to be staking his claim on Ginny so openly. The language between Hermione and Ginny was a bit formal but one can understand where Ginís coming from, having just been with Neville for the better part of a harrowing year.

It was a bit random to find Draco and Blaise in their cart. I donít know how Harry and Ron wouldíve let them in there but OK. I understand itís needed for some interaction between the two main characters!

Generally written well :)

xChar

Author's Response: Sorry about the delay in getting back to you!! I've been insanely busy with exams and all that jazz.

I really appreciate your review! This is the first one I've requested for this story so I was eager to see what you thought of it!

Yes, I agree it was a bit random but I wanted to have that confrontation between Draco and Harry on the train ride there.

I'm not to fond of the first chapter (I've been thinking of rewriting it) so I know it's not as good as it could be. Thanks for the review!


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