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Review:AC_rules says:
Lily's pretty angry 0.o

Not that I blame her, she's had a rough ride of it.

I've always imagined that given they lived so close together Severus and Lily must have had some sort of contact in that summer and it strikes me that this is pretty similar to how it would go (although in my head Lily was a little less angry - but this still works really well).

Anyway - A good start! I like the rain and the playground :)

Author's Response: Thank you kindly!

Yes, Lily is quite angry. Though most of that is because she's trying to stop herself from being hurt so she puts it into anger instead.

I'm glad you like it!

-Dem-


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