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Review:Hyenni says:
oooh, just stumbled across this! i love Potter kids stuff, and especially when they're all good friends and that! i love the idea you've got here - of the cousins all going on holiday together. i think that's adorable :P

ALBUS! nooo! he'd better be alright, otherwise i might just cry. it's only chapter three, but i think Lily, Albus and James are all nicely developing and i think the relationships between them and their cousins are lovely and quite realistic.

i admit, the first chapter confused me a little bit, but it was intriguing - i can't wait to see how it ties in with this! i assume there'll be some drama and action and everything later in the story, so i'm already looking forward to that. i'm anticipating the next chapter already!

i'm sorry i don't have time to review your earlier chapters, but i'll be ready and waiting for chapter four...so don't make me wait too long? ahaha, i'm joking, but an update soon would be rather brilliant :D

^^

Author's Response: well, I'm glad that you did come across it. hehe, I'm glad that you like the idea. I'm partial to family fluff myself ;)

oh, he'll be okay.eventually. you'll see what happened in the next chapter. ;) I'm glad that you enjoy them and their relationships, they are very fun to write.

oh, it's not all supposed to make sense right now. just intrigue you. ;) oh yes, there will be plenty of drama, action, and adventure in coming chapters. hehe.

eh, it's fine. one review for the first three chapters is good. I'll try not to make you wait that long, but I'm currently dealing with computer problems so no promise about how long it will take.


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