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Review:LovelyMioneWeasley says:
Hello there, LMW from the forums with your last requested review. Overall, I think you are fleshing this story out to be a very full and enriched story for the reader.

The format for me still just seems a bit off...mayb it's because it is in 3 person perspective or what, I'm not quite sure. I feel like there would have been more power to it if you picked diffferent chapters for each perspecitve to change into. I.e. one from Sirius, one from Snape's, one from James, one from Dumbledore, one from Remus, etc. but that's just my opinion.

You do the characters justice and overall, it is a good story.

LMW

Author's Response: I see what you mean about writing chapters in different perspectives, but to do that would completely change the story and where I am trying to go with the story - since I plan to go beyond a little bit beyond the prank. Thank you one last time for taking the time to review and give your honest opinion.

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