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Review:LovelyMioneWeasley says:
Hi there, love, final chapter and it was definitely good to read this one. I think that you have done an exceptionally good job on creating this sort of situation that seems so normal, sad but normal, and making it have that HPFF magical twist. I was particularly imprssed on the entire exchange between James and Harry.

James and Harry's relationship seemed so normal and so loving. I found it to be refreshing to be reading about a medical situation and it isn't being handled in this weird obnoxious way simply because its Harry Potter and one of his kids. I read this and felt like it could have been any son and father; I feel like you did such a great job making them more human for us to relate to as readers.

I also loved that idea that you had for James' "punishment" and James' treatment seems like a reasonable bit for a mixing of Muggle and Magical worlds. I also think that James did a good job of interacting with the Healer like an adult. It made him seem to have some maturity. I applaud you for that instead of making James seem so immature.

Overall, I loved the chapter and look forward to see how you continue with this story and I hope that you continue to work on it. Let me know about this story, please. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

LMW

Author's Response: Thank you! Again, you give me such helpful insight. Thank you so much! :)

Drue

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