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Review:DarkLadyofSlytherin says:
Hmm.The first bit is definitely intriguing. But let me tell you, the second bit reminded me entirely of the spirits in the Inheritency Series. I couldn't help but picture poor Albus becoming a Shade. I'm sure that's not what is going to happen, but that's what I pictured lol.

Anyway, I love it! Wish it weren't so short but I understand why it was. You left it at a perfect spot for me to rant and rave about the fact that its a cliffhanger! I hate cliffhangers! Okay, to be honest, I love them, but only when I'm the one leaving them! lol

I do hope James wakes up and tends to his brother. I think I might beat him (and i luffs James) if he doesn't. Of course, I also love Albus and now I am incredibly worried about him.

Can't wait for the next chapter to come out, cause I really wanna know what's happened.

Len

Author's Response: Haha, I hadn't even thought of that when I wrote that part. But your not far off on what the ball of light is. But no, he's not going to become a Shade. This story is not a crossover and I can't even see how a crossover between the two verses would work now that I think about it. :P

Hehe. Yes, it was going to be longer but it wanted to end there so I stopped there. :) Hehe, I think that is the way every writer feels. They love writing them but hate reading them.

Oh, he will defintely wake up after that yell. But what happens after will be revealed in the next chapter. ;)


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