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Review:emily says:
i think its good that you didnt make scorpius the head boy too. that would have made everything too easy, you know?

good job with the lily thing, that made me laugh a little.

-question slightly irrelevant to this chapter that i thought of two seconds ago: in the first chapter when rose and scorpius did it on the astronomy tower, was rose still a virgin before hand? (and scorpius' too, i guess.)

if so, what an awkward place to lose said V-card. less cliche than a broom cupboard, and better than a car (or a broom closet) but still weird.

good job! i've read to here today and i plan in continuing :D

Author's Response: I also felt it would have been strange to have them both be the Heads. Too convenient and cliche. Lily was honestly one of my favourite characters to write, so I'm glad you liked her characterisation. :)

As for your question, no, she wasn't a virgin. When the story gets completely finished then edited, that will be more clear.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.


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