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Review:justonemorefic says:
Well, at first I thought it was Dom, but I'm not sure, since she mentioned wanting to know about Victoire, unless she meant knowing her involvement with Teddy. But that's actually quite interesting, the way Teddy describes her in terms of Victoire. Every step of the way, you remind us of his obsession.

And oooh I just adore that description when he reaches the cliffs. The man and the umbrella, the falling angels -- whenever you mention blood, I imagine this porcelain Victoire with a drop of blood at the corner of her lips, but I can't ever see her eyes.

AHH HE JUMPS D: WAIT WHAT. WHAT. WHAT NOW. IS THAT... HOME? I'm a terrible reader/analyst, sorry xD I'll wait for the next (last?) chapter for answers rather than breaking my brain.



Author's Response: Gina!

I was thinking about writing Teddy with Dom, or even Rose - vom, vom, potentially normal Rose who elicits sympathy - but I ended up with Anonymous Woman. The perfect troll on Formspring. And yeah, he's pretty obsessed with Victoire.

AH. HA HA. Mwa ha ha ha. You'll find out soon, I hope, if the validators work their wonders. It'll all be clear. Maybe. Or just ambiguous and that. Flowery.



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