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Review:thehyacinthgirl says:
Oh noes! The last chapter! I shall miss this story in all it's radiant loveliness, but I suppose that all good things must come to an end at some point.

I really adored your characterizations of Xeno and of Capria. They were two individual people and yet somehow they seemed to fit together perfectly.

I really love how the name The Quibbler was brought about in your story because it's never brought up in the canon and it is quite an interesting name for a magazine. Your reasoning does seem to make sense.

Not that I really anticipated to, but I didn't find any mistakes with grammar, flow, pacing, syntax, or spelling in that chapter. As I've said so many times before I just really appreciate that when reading a piece.

I absolutely love the descriptions and the word choices in this piece, it seems to flow like poetry. I really adore that very much so.

I liked that she slipped on the engagement ring rather than allowing him to ask her. Of course, it was rather forward, but with Capria it didn't seem like she was being pushy or rude rather that she simply knew that one point or another that moment would come up.

It was incredibly adorable. I did want to hug Xeno, though, he seemed a bit disappointed that he couldn't have asked her properly. Though, I think that's perfectly understandable.

Aw, I love the ending. A bit fluffy and all, but it was very sweet. It didn't seem too over the top, either. I love that his stutter finally goes away. He finally got it right, indeed.

♥
linders

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