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Review:peachsnapple says:
I really like this piece. Writing it in stream-of-conscienceness allows the reader to see into Molly's mind as she comes undone. I really felt for Molly, her anger and distress with her failed relationship.

There's one little typo in the second paragraph: "I turned to the door amd dropped my wand..." Just fix the 'and'. Otherwise the grammar and spelling was good.

This is a really nice piece. Keep writing :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so very pleased that you enjoyed it as it was very interesting to write. I really loved getting to know Molly as i don't see her written about as much. Thank you again for all your lovely compliments and pointing that mistake out to me!

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