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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
I've never read film noir fanfiction, but I think you do it perfectly. It's full of witty metaphors and shady characters and each chapter of this story pulls me more and more in. You feed us just a bit more information, but then some new question pops up to keep us endlessly guessing.

If Whitby is dead, that does not bode well for Rose. I'm curious about Pansy and her motivations. I think she's shady, but not as shady as she wants to be, and not as tough as she wishes she could be, either. Often, the ones with the thickest skins are really the most vulnerable. I think she does love Draco, and that she just gives him the mysterious angle because she wants to keep him interested. I've been finding myself wondering about whether Astoria will come into play in this story, or if Draco will end up with Pansy. Or if he will end up with anyone at all? It's so difficult to tell. This is shaping up to be one of those stories where you can't predict what will come next, so you'd better be ready for sharp turns (there's my film noir metaphors coming out. I'll be speaking like a detective for the rest of the day now, annoying everyone. Maybe I'll go dig out a black raincoat or something just for effect...).

I'm very curious to find out what happens next.

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