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Review:Maybe says:
Wow. Wow. Wow.

That was amazing. Beautiful. It flowed so smoothly that I couldn't stop reading and, though obviously I was confused as to what exactly was going on, I just let the narrative carry me along. Hooked.

I loved the repitition of the lines and whenever it said "Victoire, Victoire" I imagined it like a heartbeat, rhythmic and I felt as though everything was moving really slowly. Your writing is spectacular - excellent description, compelling. This was almost hypnotic.

I thought of it as Victoire Weasley but of course, now you've put that idea into my head, it could easily be either!

Thoroughly enjoyed this,
Maybe :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

This story was probably one of the most difficult I've had to write to date, but I'm so, so happy that you liked it! A lot of it was kind of the product of timing (and carrot cake - mostly carrot cake), so to hear that it had a good effect on readers is just amazing. :)

Thank you so much, Maybe!

Celeste


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