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Review:Jess says:
okay so im a little lost. why, why did you do that?
i mean i get that she was feeling weird about the fact they were fighting over nothing and it was like they were already married but as a reader i felt like they never got a chance. we didnt see how it went wrong.
i love your story ad your writing, i have been following this story for a while now i just hope that its not to long before you throw them back togather and i pray to god you dont hurt james anymore. rachael has hurt him enough with the whole thing after christmas and now this. STOP HURTING THE POOR BOY. we like him!
god this sound like a negitive review but i want you to know i think you are a brillent writer and i still cannot wait for more of this stoy. please dont keep me waiting for long.
and please throw them back togather soon. even for a chaper where i didnt like what was happpening you wrote it wonderfully and it was realistic. and sweet when she said she loved him and his acceptance that it wasnt something she wanted but something she needed. OH i wish she didnt need it!
Jess

Author's Response: wow, i'm glad that you liked this story so much. it is drawing to a close, but you will love the next story ( i can guarantee) for a start it is called My Boyfriend: James Potter, and therefore it should lead you to assume the right things.
I think Rachael is a bit confused... and that is the reason why she dumped him which is no reason at all.
tbh i actually don't know why i did it...it just came to be part of the story...like a progression
thanks for your review :D


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