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Review:PhoenixTailAndHolly says:

liked the story, a nice missing moment, though a little bit fluffy. A sequel would be appreciated..

Please, please, please check your grammar and spelling. Half the paragraphs had errors in them, many of which would easily have been fished out had you re-read the story. Remember: it's your responsibility as a writer to spell-check. A well-proofed story is easier to read, and the enjoyment of reading the story is the goal you as a writer are trying to fulfill.

Also, don't use too many clichés, and, with missing moments: try to keep your characters in-character! Nothing is more disturbing than a dutyfull George, a self-secure Neville, or a McGonagall breaking the rules :)

Nonetheless: rated 7/10, for a nice fluffy missing moment story.

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