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Review:GracieBagel says:
oh my god... this is perfection ;) ive been hooked, it's taken me... lets me... three days to read this all from the beginning haha. I bloody love it. It's rare cause usually I hate marauders (sorry :P) and Sirius and James and whatnot but this... it's actually brilliant. I'm lost for words I mean you've given them all their own character from your own imagination rather than sticking to the complete typical image of them. I love how the focus is not on Lily either cause I don't particularly like her. I LOVE Matt. My god. He sounds gorgeous. Infact all the boys sound hot. Even James in a weird way baha. ^_^ Jst a little question, is Kylie short or tall? Exuse me if i'm being dumb here it's just one time I thought oh right she's little and blonde but then when you were comparing her to the little spritely seekers she appeared very tall, strong with big boobs? Sorry, I do tend to miss things =/
Anyway absolutely love the storyline so far. PLEASE PLEASE hurry up hehe with the next chapter cause i'm literally dying. Kylie is so likeable I just wish she'd admit her feelings for sirius a bit more. Oh and does she remember that he's the "puppy" that saved her from the pool or not? Cause it never really touched on that, well it did when she remembered he bit her.
Will the scary perverted German boy reappear by any chance? I think he should. He makes it interesting. And maybe then Sirius can beat the crap out of him? *wink wink* *nudge*
I'll stop talking now cause it's getting very long haha.
Keep up the great work.
x

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Hey, honestly, I'm not a huge Marauder fan myself... yet I've writen this beastly thing, that's getting close to thirty chapters? I've decided not to question it! I hate cookie-cutter stories, so I've tried to make one that breaks away from cliche - hopefully I've managed that much! I take it that you want Matt to get the girl, not Remus?
Kylie is sort of caught in the middle. She isn't short, obviously, but it's not like she's a beast. She's pretty average; when she's around seekers, who are MADE to be small, she feels huge, but when she's around her guys, who are all freakishly tall because that's how boys roll, she's short. It is kind of confusing, I guess, so sorry about not clearing that up!
I actually just finished the next chapter and it will hopefully be posted before the week is done - it just depends on the queue, you know? She does remember that Sirius is a 'puppy' but she doesn't really dwell on the fact - they have an awkward enough relationship as it is without her thinking about him in his doggy form all of the time!
Of course the German will reappear - that's why I put him in in the first place, so he could have some fun later on!
No review is ever too long, my dear! Never!
Thanks again!

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