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Review:SexyDoorFrames says:
Once again, beautiful start. You captured my attention straight away. Protecting Your Brain from Drain-Dwellers I mean, it seems so canon that he would write an article like that, so much kudos. It's weird, but not weird that it's OTT.

Capria's back story was perfect, well not perfect but you know what I mean. It just fitted her and explained some of her actions in past chapters. I mean, it's so sad that her parents died :(

Xeno out of the window! What a situation! It's easy to imagine and the very thought made me giggle.

Ahhh! Progress! I loved these lines.
I want you to be my girlfriend, he declared.

I want you to be my boyfriend, she replied, giggling.

And she told him she loved him! I thought it was perfect, even though they just started going out, it didn't feel like it was being rushed because you've built-up their relationship perfectly that I actually felt like going 'about time!' haha. And the last line! I loved it. It was perfect.

What a beautiful chapter. I'm so glad things finally happened with them! Though it does make me sad for Capria's future :( This couple needs to be together forever. Not just for a little while. You've actually made me care so much about these characters. I love them! I can't believe I only have one chapter left.

In all, it was amazing.

Author's Response: Wow, I'm so terrible at responding to reviews. But THANK YOU. Your reviews mean so much to me.

Xeno has become so real to me, so I'm glad to have portrayed that authenticity. It has been so fun to watch him develop as well as fall in love. I still squee over how cute they are together! If you're still around and interested, I'll be posting a sequel soon, called When We Weren't Looking.

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