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Review:SexyDoorFrames says:
I love how you open the chapters, they are perfect. They chuck you into the situation right away and manage to capture my attention perfectly. I love the way you write everything, especially Xeno and Capria's relationship, it's beautiful. They are just perfect for each other. I mean the words just slow, you have a gift :) I wonder what happened to her parents, I like that she took him to her parents grave, it shows how close that they have become to share that part of her life.

The ending made me feel sorry for Xeno. I wonder why Capria ran away. Hmm. But you wrote his anger and the last part of this chapter perfectly. My heart just broke a little for him.

In all, it was a beautiful chapter and I'm really enjoying this story so far.

Author's Response: Thank you! You flatter me so! I'm just thrilled that you're enjoying the story and that Xeno and Capria are working their way into your heart (even if it means your heart broke a little). They have been such a joy to write!

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