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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
I love your descriptions. I can see everything vividly without even trying. The way you've painted this new age of the Dynasty and the crumbling Ministry, and Draco's thoughts and movements and just everything really, is superb. Your grammar is also excellent, which I very much appreciate.

Also, I like you how have creatively incorporated magic into the story in such a casual way, to make it all the more realistic. I'm impressed by the little details like LUMOS - London University of Magical Occupational Studies - because it adds more realism and magic to the story in such a subtle way. It's really obvious that you have put a great deal of thought into this story, and that's really shining through.

But besides the remarkable writing is the remarkable plot! I find myself marveling at its originality. It's like a breath of fresh air. You unfold the mystery in tiny pieces. But even bigger than the mystery of Kevin and Rose, in my eyes, is this mysterious Draco. I want to know all about him. You've made me really interested and you peel back the layers just enough to give us a little information, but still leave us wanting more.

The way you ended this chapter!! Gahh! Cliffie! I must know about this dead man and why there is a string attached to his shoes.


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