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Review:CoLorful DreaM says:
Hello. Here's Ramona from the forums with your review!

You asked about the building of suspense, as much as I can remember. I'll start by saying this is just my kind of story. Just as Johnny Depp would say, I hate the obvious thing, in both what I read and write. This is the start to what I would write and it really helps in me having a good impression from the very beginning.
There's much mystery - I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THAT! There's much mystery in the characters personal lives, in their jobs and around the characters. It really keeps you thinking. Questions pop out your head: Who were those men at the beginning? Why were they killing? What was between Roxanne and Teddy? Which is the connection between all these?
I would normally say "As I said, I won't review more than 1 chapter. You can re-request...blah-blah-blah...", but I think I'll make an exception and save this in my favorites for later. :d

~Ramona

Author's Response: Hey Ramona!

This is a wonderful review. It's so wonderful to receive reinforcement that I actually managed the suspense that I intended when I wrote this. I had never thought of that Johnny Depp quote in relationship to this story, but it is very fitting. I'm so excited that you favorited this! That, I, wow.


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