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Review:DemetersChild says:
DemetersChild here from the forums!

The is one of the most unique things I have ever read on this site. There are so many go-to pairings and stories that sometimes it's hard to find something truly different. But this...well this is a breath of fresh air.

Luna has to be one of my favorite characters so, naturally, her parents are of a great interest as well. I love the way you've written Xeno--very much like his daughter. He enjoys every aspect of life as much as she did.

And her mother is just delightful! I see where Luna gets her playfulness from.

This story flowed magnificently. There were a few places where I stopped (a place where you used some form of "flick" three times in two sentences), but other than that it was so smooth. The transition between scenes was flawless.

This was a wonderful first chapter as well. It gave me just enough information to be interested and want to keep reading. It's a lovely beginning and I can't wait to read the rest. :)

Magically Yours,


Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your review!

It's been overwhelming hearing such praise for this story. I was not expecting the flood of positivity. At any rate, I'm so thrilled to hear you're enjoying this story thus far. It was a joy to write, and the characters have latched themselves onto my heart. I hope you continue to enjoy!

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