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Review:SexyDoorFrames says:
I just love the way you've crafted your characters, I mean *sigh* I'm so jealous. They just come across effortless across the page and spring to life in their own little odd ways. They're realistic, odd but not OTT and they are so lovable that I was rooting for them from chapter one.

“No, Xeno,” she interrupted, before adding, rather roughly, “You’re just too strange.” This line actually broke something inside of me. It was so sad :( Poor Xeno. I hate seeing him hurt.

This story makes me smile, a lot of the time. Especially when Xeno and Capria are together. They are just so perfect for each other. *sighs* I still adore Capria, the fact that she can see through him and her characterization is just beautiful. She is just so refreshing to read about.

I also LOVED the Nargles reference. It was just perfect.

In all, beautiful chapter. I really enjoyed it.

- Keely.

Author's Response: It's such a treat watching you fall for these characters, as the very same thing happened as I wrote them. They're so real to me, sometimes I think we're friends. In fact, as I write this, they're begging for a sequel. I suppose we'll see. ;)

Thank you again.

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