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Review:SexyDoorFrames says:
This is just beautiful. I may be in love with this story. It just continues to get better and better.

The characters? Oh my, I love them. You can really see them as the type of people who would be parents to Luna, she is sort of a great mix of them both in a way. I love the way you've characterized Xeno, it's perfect. I also really liked his brother too and reading those scenes, it's clear that they love each other a lot.

I'm so glad he broke up with nameless! :p I'm not really a fan of her, she's not perfect for Xeno the way Capria is. I also love the name Capria it's so pretty :) But nameless woman is so mean. She's just ugh. Harsh and mean are some 12+ words I can think for her. Haha. But Capria, I adore her, she just seems so sure and almost comfortable with herself. It's very easy to like these characters so that is amazing because I find that quite hard.

Your writing it excellent, it's fluid and easy to follow. It's captivating too as I read this chapter in one sitting because I was enjoying it so much.

- Keely

Author's Response: Oh my. In love? You're too sweet!

"Nameless." You make me laugh. :) Yes, she is awfully mean. I may have done her character a disservice by making her so very irredeemable. Some editing may have to be done there. But she's meant to be hated, to some extent, so I'm glad that came across.

I also love the name Capria. It was fitting to give a lovely name to such a beautiful soul.

Thank you again, darling.

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