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Review:DemetersChild says:
DemetersChild here from the forums! So sorry it's taken me forever to get you your reviews!

Eccentric is definitely the right word for this story.

I loved the beginning. It jumps right into the story and immediately make me want to keep reading, so that's always nice. I could really feel Rose's emotions and how torn she was feeling through it all.

I wish though that there had been a moment before she ran away that she saw Lily and Scorpius together, or even Scorpius standing by himself looking so happy. Seeing something like that would have pushed her to run away.

After Scorpius shows up in the attic it starts to get a little strange. I would have liked to see more between Rose and Lily. And it just seemed so odd that they would get married that same day, with Lily there watching the man who just left her with her best friend and cousin.

It just seemed a little rushed that they would get married not an hour after revealing their feelings for each other. You did a pretty good job of explaining it off, but it still felt a little weird.

I did really enjoy it. There was so much emotion and so much going on that I would have had to try to be bored while reading this. Truly lovely. :)

Magically Yours,

Dem

Author's Response: hey Dem! Thanks for your magical review xD

I am glad you found the emotions and all appropriate! I know it was a bit rushed, but it was a spur-on-the-moment one-shot and well, that was all i could do!

thanks again!

cheers!
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