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Review:Sunflower says:
I actually really liked this. I think you hit it spot on; the characterization of Snape is amazing! I loved your wording and the small powerful lines. If there was one thing I could say you could improve it is the short sentences: a whole oneshot filled with oneliners is almost poemlike, and while I like poems, I think that maybe you could have filled out some of the oneliners with a bit more description. I'm not saying that you need to write 3000 more words, no, but maybe just make the paragraphs longer? Just to make the story flow a little better, the oneliners make the story a little fragmented to read - it doesn't flow nearly as well as I think it could have if you had made the paragraphs longer. It was still awesome though, I loved it! :) keep up the good work

Author's Response: Argh! Thankyou, first of all for this awesome review!

I know... I've re read it over and over and it seems so... bare? I do need more description and more... I don't even know. Thankyou so much for your criticism, I'll have to edit it :)

I loved writing Snape, he's such an interesting character. I don't think he was ever purely evil... just... misunderstood?

Anyway, thanks again for reviewing :) It made my day!


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